Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister

Chapter 551: 3 Side Stories

*Author Note*

Three small stories. I didn’t want to bother posting three mini-chapters, so I’ll simply separate them within the chapter.

*End of Author Note*

Story 1: A new Dojutsu

A tense atmosphere reigned inside a living room of the Yamanage residence as Naruto and Ino sat on a couch, and opposite them sat Inoichi, Ino’s father, and Mika, her mother. Well, the atmosphere between Naruto and Inoichi was tense, while Ino and Mika seemingly were not even noticing anything wrong.

Anyway, as soon as everyone was comfortable and tea was served, Ino hugged Naruto’s arm with a happy expression on her face.

“Mom, Dad, I’m pregnant!”

As soon as these words left Ino’s mouth, the air solidified.

*Cough*

Inoichi coughed, resulting in some blood landing on the table in between the two couched as his whole body started shaking.

“I will kill you! I will kill YOU!! I WILL KILL YOU, NARUTO!!!”

Inoichi’s anger exploded as he flared his chakra with a mighty battle roar. His eyes turned crimson while the kanji meaning “precious” appeared in his left eye and the one for “daughter” in his right.

The Dotinggan.

“DIE!!! [Kagutsuchi]”

Naruto’s body was engulfed in a crimson flame, burning to a crisp in an instant, killing him.

When Ino saw that, she opened her eyes in shock and looked at her father in awe.

“Whoa, I didn’t know you were so strong, daddy! I don’t care about Naruto anymore! You are the coolest!”

Meanwhile, back in the real world, a frothing Inoichi was sprawled on the ground with a massive grin on his face. There was a slowly growing bump on the back of his head, and his wife stood beside him, menacingly holding a frying pan.

Moments later, a massive grin appeared on Mika’s face as the frying pan vanished. She immediately walked up to her daughter and hugged her.

“Congratulations, dear! Have you two already discussed the name of the baby? If you have any questions, just come to me, and I will help you as good as possible.”

While Ino and her mother were hugging, Naruto glanced at Inoichi’s body and clapped his hands together while lowering his head.

“Rest in peace, father-in-law.”

Story 2: The Hokage Mountain

The Hokage Mountain: Konoha’s iconic mountain with the faces of all the Kage carved into it. Usually, all of Konoha’s citizens were proud of this monument, but in recent years they felt kind of reluctant to look at it.

Hashirama, Tobimaru, Hiruzen, Minato, Tsunade. When it was just these five, everything was still fine. All these people had stories behind them, and their feats were widely known in the shinobi world.

The sixth Hokage, Sasuke Uchiha, apparently was a hero during the fourth shinobi war and someone who protected Konoha against Akatsuki, but somehow, no one remembered him doing anything.

Anyway, there are rumors that he quit the job after almost burning down the Hokage building, but most people dismissed that as mere rumors and would rather believe the rumor that he had some other problems that prevented him from doing his duties.

On a side note, there were also some rumors that Sasuke would occasionally walk around while transformed into a woman, but most people dismissed these rumors as nonsense as well.

Anyway, the seventh Hokage, Shikamaru Nara. Despite being known for his intelligence, few people saw him as proper Kage material due to his low strength, not even realizing that there was little purpose in assigning a strong person as a paper-pusher.

There were rumors that he got the positions due to having an extremely powerful backer. Additionally, there were rumors that he had absolutely no interest in the position, but that was dismissed as nonsense by most. After all, if he doesn’t want it, how did he get it in the first place?

Anyway, one day he locked himself up for a week with the Nara clan’s greatest minds, and after emerging from his seclusion, he executed a 47-step-plan to ditch the position on someone else. Some murmur, that one of the contingency plans could have resulted in Yuna becoming the new Hokage, but he vehemently denied that.

The eight Hokage, Hatake Kakashi. Although well known, he couldn’t exactly compete with characters like Hiruzen and Minato, so the situation still didn’t feel right.

Additionally, in the recent months, rumors appeared that Kakashi was already looking for a replacement due to problems with his mental health.

Somehow, a 16-year-old Konohamaru was currently the top runner for the position, confusing many people.

However, that wasn’t even the worst part…

“So, do we just stop carving faces into the mountain, try to somehow squeeze the next face on there, or are we starting a new row underneath the first?

The Hokage mountain was getting rather stuffy. There were frequent discussions in Konoha’s top branches about what they were supposed to do when the next Kage was selected, and so far, there was no consensus.

Story 3: Disciplining your Descendant

It was a sunny day in Konoha, and today a rather interesting event was about to happen just above the Uzumaki clan.

A man with white skin and eyes came floating down from the sky and hovered above the Uzumaki compound.

“HINATA! I’M TONERI OOTSUTSUKI, AND I’M HERE TO TAKE YOU IN AS MY WIFE!!!”

These words were boldly shouted, causing them to echo over the Uzumaki compound, making everyone who heard them tremble in fear.

“S-Someone d-dares to claim one of Yuna’s women?”

“He’s tired of living, you know.”

“This will be a blast to watch, you know.”

Surprisingly, the new arrival wasn’t instantly blasted from the sky, and a black portal appeared behind him instead.

Kaguya serenely floated out of the portal, her white hands gently grabbing the newly arrived person’s shoulders.

Toneri was surprised by someone suddenly grabbing him and wanted to slap away the two hands, but to his surprise, he couldn’t move the hands at all.

He turned his head to see who gripped him and immediately froze in place.

“Ka… Ka… KAGUYA!?”

As one of Kaguya’s distant descendants, he naturally knew who that woman in front of him was, scaring the life out of him.

“Yuna said I’m responsible for the discipline of my descendants, so I’m afraid I have to punish you for your insolence.”

Before Toneri could understand what was going on, he was firmly placed over Kaguya’s knees, with his arms and legs trapped in place by Kaguya’s hair.

*SMACK*

A loud smacked echoed over the Uzumaki compound as Kaguya’s hand impacted Toneri’s butt.

“H-Hey, s-stop! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!”

*SMACK*

“Disciplining a naughty child.”

Kaguya was unbothered by Toneri’s words and simply continued spanking away.

“Hahaha, as expected, we in for an awesome show, you know.”

“Oh wow, mid-air public spanking. Not something you see every day, you know.”

“YOU NEED TO PULL DOWN HIS PANTS, YOU KNOW!!!”

Kaguya heard someone giving some advice, and after pondering it for a moment, Kaguya remembered how Yuna had punished her maid before and realized that the advice was probably correct.

So, without further ado, she decisively pulled down Toneri’s pants and continued spanking away.

“W-WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!! DON’T PULL… OW, DOWN MY PANTS!!!”

Kaguya realized that pulling down Toneri’s pants seemed to have a satisfactory effect on the punishment, causing her to nod in approval.

‘Yuna said that taking someone’s advice is nothing shameful and can even improve the situation. Despite the person giving me a tip being much weaker than me, he gave me good advice. It seems like Yuna was correct, and I should listen to other people more frequently.

So, the spanking continued under the hooting of the cheering Uzumaki clan and the wailing of Toneri.

While everyone found the situation rather hilarious, there was a single person who had different thoughts while watching that scene.

‘Ahh, I’m so jealous~’

As that person said that, their crimson eyes slowly turned pink while her irises gradually became heart-shaped.

To be continuedRate this book<span data-hvi=”true” svg=”[object Object]”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><h3>You may also like<a title=”More” href=”/alsoLikeViewMore/18923491906741805?bookType=0″>MORE</a></h3><a title=”Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”13915522306315405″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”13915522306315405″ data-report-bid=”13915522306315405″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”13915522306315405″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_13915522306315405″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/harry-potter-and-the-fortunate-queen_13915522306315405″>Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen<small>Book&Literature</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>4.5</a><a title=”The Tale Of Kitsuna” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”18715194905705205″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”18715194905705205″ data-report-bid=”18715194905705205″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”18715194905705205″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_18715194905705205″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/the-tale-of-kitsuna_18715194905705205″>The Tale Of Kitsuna<small>Fantasy Romance</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>4.7</a><a title=”Evolution of Slime to Peak” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23359246605040605″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23359246605040605″ data-report-bid=”23359246605040605″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23359246605040605″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23359246605040605″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/evolution-of-slime-to-peak_23359246605040605″>Evolution of Slime to Peak<small>Fantasy</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>4.6</a><a title=”The Alpha’s Replacement Bride” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23306781305797305″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23306781305797305″ data-report-bid=”23306781305797305″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23306781305797305″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23306781305797305″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/the-alpha’s-replacement-bride_23306781305797305″>The Alpha’s Replacement Bride<small>Fantasy Romance</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>5.0</a><a title=”Ketika Dia Pergi” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23279791505655905″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23279791505655905″ data-report-bid=”23279791505655905″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23279791505655905″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23279791505655905″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/ketika-dia-pergi_23279791505655905″>Ketika Dia Pergi<small>Romansa Anak Muda</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>5.0</a><a title=”My Ex Billionaire” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23273325205623505″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23273325205623505″ data-report-bid=”23273325205623505″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23273325205623505″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23273325205623505″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/my-ex-billionaire_23273325205623505″>My Ex Billionaire<small>Romansa Kontemporer</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>5.0</a><a title=”Manaless Mage” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23248033005515105″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23248033005515105″ data-report-bid=”23248033005515105″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23248033005515105″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23248033005515105″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/manaless-mage_23248033005515105″>Manaless Mage<small>Fantasy</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>4.7</a><a title=”NOT BY MISTAKE LOVE” data-report-l1=”6″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_bookcover” data-report-ltype=”A” data-report-pdid=”23239201805475105″ data-report-uiname=”bookcover” data-report-dt=”cbid” data-report-did=”23239201805475105″ data-report-bid=”23239201805475105″ data-report-alg=”{“V”:”1″,”alg”:”181.0.1″,”expid”:1000,”itemid”:”23239201805475105″,”logid”:671469595034275794,”origin”:”12058″,”preitemid”:”b_23239201805475105″,”scene”:”book-related”,”type”:”0″,”version”:””}” href=”/book/not-by-mistake-love_23239201805475105″>NOT BY MISTAKE LOVE<small>Teen</small><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>5.0</a>Reviews580 Reviews<svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M13.5 12L9 18h3.5l4.5-6-4.5-6H9l4.5 6z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><a title=”DrunkenScholarHill” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4301061992″ href=”/profile/4301061992?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”DrunkenScholarHill”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>DrunkenScholarHillLv5<svg></image></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M19 8a7.003 7.003 0 01-5.5 6.839V23h-3v-8.161A7 7 0 1119 8zm-7 2a2 2 0 100-4 2 2 0 000 4z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><a title=”DrunkenScholarHill” href=”/profile/4301061992?appId=10″>DrunkenScholarHill</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

Very humorous take on the entire reborn into Naruto theme. Have to say it’s a really refreshing sense of humour. Not the typical gags that have been done to death but really surprising original jokes or inspiration taken from somewhere I don’t know haha. The dialogue is great and characters really pop and aren’t cookie cutter shaped exposition or cliches. There’s a satisfying lifestyle they’re living And it’s great. No knowledge of Naruto the series but a whole bunch of outside context powers gathered through years of Xianxia living. Lots of fun situations happened and will probably happen in the future. Great stories like this send me to the authors profile in hopes they’ve written a few more stories haha. Unfortunately this is the first for this profile but hopefully it won’t be the last 🙂

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”19131183705082200″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/19131183705082200″></a><small>1 year ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>81<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”19131183705082200″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/19131183705082200″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>3</a><a title=”Einstein3″ data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”2130210331″ href=”/profile/2130210331?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Einstein3″><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Einstein3Lv4<svg></image></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M19 8a7.003 7.003 0 01-5.5 6.839V23h-3v-8.161A7 7 0 1119 8zm-7 2a2 2 0 100-4 2 2 0 000 4z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><a title=”Einstein3″ href=”/profile/2130210331?appId=10″>Einstein3</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

Usually, I do not give out pure 5 stars as there is always a little something, that sours the experience for me. This time, however, it’s impossible to give anything else! Every aspect of this story is superb. The quality of writing is very nearly flawless with only a minuscule chance of even typos appearing. The development of the story leans on the canon timeline of events. The tiny changes pile up though, and somewhere in the not-so-far future, canon will be wrecked. The characters… Oh god, the characters. Usually, this is where I lower the rating, since you’ll either have copied characters from canon or heavily ooc ones. Instead, you’ll get a single original character, who believably influences others. That’s extremely hard to pull off correctly, but it’s done fantastically well here. Updating Stability. We get lot’s of chapters to fuel our addiction, nuff said. World Background: Here, I do not only rate the Naruto universe, but also her home dimension. It’s been deliciously vague till now. We get snippets of information, that keep us interested but not so much that it feels like an info dump, which is a hard line to toe. Well done! Overall, we get a reinvented universe, a lovable main cast and all around a good feeling while reading this book. 5 stars are very much deserved and well earned! Keep up the good work!

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”20145997906014600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/20145997906014600″></a><small>1 year ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>35<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”20145997906014600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/20145997906014600″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>8</a><a title=”Bored_MC” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4308176403″ href=”/profile/4308176403?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Bored_MC”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Bored_MCLv4<svg></image></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M19 8a7.003 7.003 0 01-5.5 6.839V23h-3v-8.161A7 7 0 1119 8zm-7 2a2 2 0 100-4 2 2 0 000 4z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><a title=”Bored_MC” href=”/profile/4308176403?appId=10″>Bored_MC</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

honestly the name and synopsis of this fic is god-awful, and despite having it in my library for a while i could never bring myself to read it cuz i figured itd be terribly disappointing, like strongest talent in naruto, but then i actually read it and even just for the comedy factor alone its great, and despite the MC being a cultivator and so obviously from a CN world, she’s not ‘Chinese’ if you know what i mean, all in all, i read 300 chapters (400k+ words) in 3 days, once i started this i literally, and i cant express this enough, LITERALLY, did not stop reading unless to eat, sleep, or toilet breaks. i just couldnt put it down, the writing is as good as it can be, but the Dialog, OoOOooohh~~ its sooo goooood, honestly the characters feel SO real, its impossible to not be immersed, and despite how this may be difficult to believe by my review so far, but i have quite high standards, yet i love this fic, in spite of the fact that i dont really even like the plot, fics where the MC is a part of narutos generation arent really my cup off tea and yet i love this one because it is just so well written. and finally, Author-san, if youre reading this i want you to know that i spend all my time reading because i hate my life and like this i can escape into the lives of others, and i just want you to know that even if it was only for 3 days, thank you so, so much for letting me feel happy again for a bit :> TL:DR: dont let the title and synopsis deceive you, this story is amazing, at least read the first 2 chapters and you wont be able to put it down

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”21577047605830800″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/21577047605830800″></a><small>8 months ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>35<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”21577047605830800″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/21577047605830800″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>6</a><a title=”Maerry” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”author” data-report-did=”2089607948″ href=”/profile/2089607948?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Maerry”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>MaerryAuthor<a title=”Maerry” href=”/profile/2089607948?appId=10″>Maerry</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

Here I go shameless 5 Star review. Had this story in my head for quite some time now. I started making notes where I want this to go about two month ago and now im finally bringing it on the screen. This will have a good mix of action, comedy and a little bit of romance, while occasionaly pointing out the weirdness that is the Naruto world. Hope you enjoy it.

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18923606905080900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18923606905080900″></a><small>1 year ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>58<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18923606905080900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18923606905080900″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>27</a><a title=”DaoisttG3KuY” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4320969491″ href=”/profile/4320969491?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”DaoisttG3KuY”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>DaoisttG3KuYLv1<a title=”DaoisttG3KuY” href=”/profile/4320969491?appId=10″>DaoisttG3KuY</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23215308906429600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/23215308906429600″></a><small>2 months ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>34<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23215308906429600″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/23215308906429600″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button></a><a title=”Orthanos” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4300856858″ href=”/profile/4300856858?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Orthanos”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>OrthanosLv5<svg></image></svg><a title=”Orthanos” href=”/profile/4300856858?appId=10″>Orthanos</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

I never thought that I would see a cultivator naruto fanfic that is worth reading. All things considered I would love to dump some PWR Stones to this fanfic. But 15k words which should of be met or maybe it needs ten reviews. Can you post multiple reviews for one book / fanfic?

<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18956600305012900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18956600305012900″></a><small>1 year ago</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>30<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”18956600305012900″ href=”/review/18923491906741805/review_detail/18956600305012900″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>5</a><a title=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”2613426287″ href=”/profile/2613426287?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4<svg></image></svg><a title=”Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk” href=”/profile/2613426287?appId=10″>Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>

Let All Mongrels Who Read This Know, That This Fanfiction Has This King’s Stamp Of Approval. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

<figure data-hvi=”true” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”18923491906741805″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-did=”19376544905803900″>