All Novel Full Chapter 137: The Big Kunai
Chapter 137: The Big Kunai
– You’re back! – the girl rushed to hug the young Shinobi
– Ha-ha-ha of course! The war is over! –
“I didn’t think I’d see you so soon!” –
– Thank Tetsuya-sama for this! If it wasn’t for him, the war would have lasted much longer and would have taken much more lives! –
– It’s clear without your words. – the girl waved her hand – It’s not bad being under the wing of the Shinobi God, isn’t it? –
– I’m no better myself. – the guy smiled – You ask about such an obvious. Of course it’s good! –
Today, all the Shinobi who were sent to war returned to Konoha. Mothers cried with happiness, meeting unharmed sons and daughters. Wives and husbands rejoiced at the return of their spouses. Children, frightened by the stories of adults about the war, jumped into the arms of their parents with laughter.
Involuntarily, an ordinary weekday turned into a holiday, but this does not always happen. After the First World War, on the day of the Shinobi’s return, there was a lot of grief. Then the mournful cries of souls, tearing from the bodies from despair, could be heard in the village.
Such days secretly became mourning days, but not this time.
A nondescript guy, passing by a couple, smiled slightly and went into the “Ichiraku Ramen”.
– Welcome! – Teuchi said energetically with a smile – Today there are big discounts in Ichiraku Ramen, for heroes who have returned from the front! –
– Even so. – the guy shook his head, sitting down – Unfortunately I’m not a hero, so… One “sea” ramen. –
– One minute! –
While Teuchi was making a portion with an infectious smile, the client, closing his eyes, seemed to enjoy the noise of Konoha’s main street.
– Hello, Teuchi-san! –
Another visitor came inside. His plain green suit was striking, as was the rest of the man’s appearance.
– As usual? Teuchi asked, raising his head
– Yeah. – Dai nodded and sat down next to the guy
– Your ramen, bon appetit. Teuchi placed a bowl of delicious soup in front of the first guest.
– thanks. –
– Hey, Dai, did you hear it was you who passed the news to Mito-sama and Tsunade-sama about Tetsuya-sama’s new mission? –
– How did you know?! – Dai said in amazement
– Are you kidding? – Teuchi grinned while making a portion of ramen – A bunch of people saw you running out of the Senju residence at great speed. And right after you, Tsunade-sama ran out and rushed to the Hokage. –
– I see. Yes, I gave them the news. –
– You must have had a hard time. –
– I’ve never been so scared in my life! – Dai’s eyes bulged, which looked rather comical with his appearance – I couldn’t even think that women could be so scary! –
“You mean scary?” Teuchi chuckled
– Yes, yes, yes, yes. – quickly rattled Dai, looking over his shoulder – Tsunade-sama and Mito-sama are very beautiful, but equally frightening! –
Teuchi put the bowl in front of the man – Bon appetit. –
– Thank you – Dai nodded and took the chopsticks – You know, at that moment I thought I was going to die. –
– Don’t exaggerate. – the owner of the establishment waved his hand
– I’m not exaggerating! – Dai waved his head – At one point such pressure fell on me that my legs just trembled. If Mito-sama had also lost her temper, then her knees would have definitely buckled. –
The guy next to Dai, while he was eating, “warmed” his ears with all his might.
– Tsunade-sama and Kushina-chan were the most angry. And if Tsunade-sama just crushed the cup in her hands, then Kushina-chan literally went berserk! –
Teuchi raised an eyebrow, grinning
– The pupil in her eyes narrowed, became like a wild animal. The crimson chakra came out of the body, enveloping the girl, forming one fox tail and a pair of small ears on the top of her head. – Dai pointed at himself with his hands where the ears were located – And then Mito-sama said only one word, without even looking at her, “Calm down.” –
– And? –
– That’s it. – Dai shrugged his shoulders – In a moment the whole chakra disappeared and Kushina-chan became a cute girl again. –
– Business ~ and… What did Hokage say then? –
– He said that he warned that the mission could be quite dangerous. But he gave the reward, as for the A-rank mission, adding from his wallet personally. –
“You’re the lucky one. –
– Yeah. – Dai smiled and put the empty bowl aside after finishing it – Thank you, it was delicious as always. Goodbye! –
– Good luck! Teuchi shouted at the back of the Dai running out.
When silence formed in the room, Teuchi narrowed his eyes and said – Your women are real lionesses, Tetsuya-sama. –
The nondescript guy’s eyes widened slightly and looked at Teuchi in surprise – When did you understand? –
– Almost as soon as you came in. – Teuchi smiled – You have completely changed your appearance, but your aura and demeanor betray you. – he shook his head – No one even has such an aura as you have. However, as well as habits. –
– Eh, it was always hard for me to blend in with the crowd, – Tetsuya smiled wryly, dispelling the henge – You are not so simple, the owner of Ichiraku Ramen. –
– There is nothing unusual about me. Just a little discerning talent. –
– I believe. Tetsuya chuckled, “So what were you saying about Tsunade and her running to the Hokage residence?” –
– I don’t know much. I only heard that Tsunade-sama burst into the Hokage’s office like a hurricane and broke something there while screaming loudly. –
– Broke it? –
– Yes, it sounded like something wooden was broken. That’s all I know. –
– That’s how it is, I see. All right, I’ll go to the teacher. – Before leaving, Tetsuya changed his appearance again so as not to attract attention unnecessarily.
– Good luck to you. Teuchi said finally.
Enjoying the pleasant joyful atmosphere, Tetsuya walked to the Kage residence, but when there were only a couple of streets left to go, he suddenly noticed a girl in the park who was looking at passers-by with a calm face.
Approaching her, he asked a little discouraged – Orochi, what are you doing? –
– Tetsuya. – she immediately recognized her friend and comrade in the stranger – Nothing. Just watching people. –
Intrigued, the guy sat down next to him on a bench – And why? –
– hm. You could say I study people. – she said calmly and turned her face to him – I didn’t know that when people around you are happy, then you feel good at heart. –
But Tetsuya ignored this statement. Now he was staring intently at Orochi’s pale face – What is it? Makeup? –
Orochi’s eyes were perfectly highlighted with makeup. Lips are slightly made up, as well as eyebrows with eyelashes. Orochi looked very good without any makeup, but with these small touches, the girl’s appearance was fully revealed.
– Yes. – she was embarrassed – Tsunade said that if I were at least three hundred times a man, she would not let me look presentable now. Well, it’s not worth talking to me in a masculine way either, she’s right. –
– Yeah. Well… it suits you. Tetsuya said awkwardly
Orochi’s cheeks turned a little pink, but it was very noticeable on her pale skin – Thank you. –
– “Infection, Tsunade, what are you up to…” – Tetsuya thought – How is life in a new body? –
– Unbelievable. – she smiled – As if I was blind before, but with a new body I saw the light. I didn’t know that life could bring so many emotions. I didn’t know that life was so good. –
– Still dreaming of immortality? –
– Yes. Orochi quickly replied. Her pupil was sharpened, and her voice had a depth that was never seen before–Even more. Now that I’ve learned how good life can be, my dream of immortality has begun to shine much, much brighter. Now I have to achieve immortality. –
– “Just don’t say that Orochi is turning into a bad path…” – Tetsuya frowned inwardly – What are you going to do now when you liked it so much in a new body? –
– Um… well, I’m going to prepare a new homunculus… In general, I think I’ll just try to change the gender. –
– Wait, haven’t you already started making it? Tetsuya raised an eyebrow, “How long has it been?” –
– And well … – Orochi’s eyes were running around awkwardly – There were just some problems there… But it won’t last long. –
– Do you need help? –
– No, no, no. – she quickly waved her hands – I can handle it myself. You’d better tell me how you’re going to apologize to the girls. They were very upset. – quickly changed the subject of Orochi
– Bribery. Tetsuya quickly replied, smiling guiltily, “I know I did very badly, but they definitely wouldn’t let me go alone. –
Orochi squinted at him with a squinted look – However, it’s also very disgusting to put them in front of the fact and make them worry about themselves, don’t you think? –
–Uh… are you angry too?” – “Are you telling Orochimaru that for sure!?” –
– What makes you think that? – she pricked him with a look
– I see, so you’re angry. Is Jiraiya not thrilled either? –
– Yes. He thinks you don’t trust him, just like you don’t trust us, after he made a mistake in the battle with Hanzo. –
– This is complete nonsense. Tetsuya exhaled heavily
– Someone else’s soul is dark. –
– Okay, I’m going to the sensei. Tetsuya stood up, and then abruptly remembered something – Ah! And here you go. –
Tetsuya handed chakra a paper with a beautiful seal
– What is it? – I picked up the seal, Orochi
– A gift. I do not know if more accurate news has reached Konoha or not, but in Willow I ran into Kakuzu. –
–You mean…” her eyes widened
– Yes, the famous S-rank nukenin Kakuzu is inside. They say he is immortal…” he finished with a smile
– Thank you very much! – she said loudly and stood up, hugged Tetsu tightly
The girl hugged him, pressing her big breasts to his, without any malicious or mercenary intent.
That’s just Tetsuya had been “celibate” for a week, and therefore his penis quickly woke up. It really scared the guy. Literally threw in a sweat.
– Ah-ha-ha – he laughed awkwardly – Well, that’s it, that’s enough. Do not worry too much about this gift. Come on, that’s enough. Tetsuya was saying, patting the girl on the back, but inside he was shouting, “Get away, I’m scared!” –
Finally Orochi moved away from him – Thank you, it means a lot to me. –
– You’re welcome, I’ll repeat myself again. I didn’t think it was so important to you now. Tetsuya said with a smile, feeling sweat running down his back.
– Now it’s very important to me… By the way, what’s so hard there? I felt it in my stomach…–
– Kunai. – Tetsuya immediately replied extremely seriously, without letting the girl finish – We are Shinobi, Orochi. Naturally we carry concealed weapons. –
– Why is it so big? she raised an eyebrow .
– My special development. –
– And what kind of development is this? –
– This is a kunai that is slightly larger and wider than the others. It has a powerful explosive seal on it. When the kunai explodes, it splits into small fragments and which at great speed pierce into everything that was nearby. Tetsuya spoke quickly without blinking an eye
– Interesting… Can I see it? –
– No! – he answered sharply, too loudly – That is, not yet. I told you it was a development. He’s not ready yet, and I don’t want to show the “imperfection” – at the end, the guy smiled inwardly praising himself for his ingenuity.
– Okay, but you’ll definitely show me later. –
– Of course, of course. – Tetsuya nodded three times – Well, I’ll go, I’m late for something. See you soon! –
A moment and the guy disappeared, leaving a thoughtful girl near the bench – But Tetsuya, why would you wear an unfinished design on your body? – she muttered, squinting
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<figure data-hvi=”true” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-did=”23106896105187400″></figure><a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23106896105187400″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23106896105187400″></a><small>5mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>79<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23106896105187400″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23106896105187400″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>26</a><a title=”TFH” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”2410403992″ href=”/profile/2410403992?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”TFH”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>TFHLv6<svg></image></svg><a title=”TFH” href=”/profile/2410403992?appId=10″>TFH</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>this is a translation. pls add the site where we can find the raws. plus mentioning who the author is and that you are translating it. otherwise. youbare stealing the authors work
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23237947905213300″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23237947905213300″></a><small>4mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>12<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23237947905213300″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23237947905213300″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>2</a><a title=”Dr200″ data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4320004684″ href=”/profile/4320004684?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Dr200″><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Dr200Lv2<svg></image></svg><a title=”Dr200″ href=”/profile/4320004684?appId=10″>Dr200</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>The name is journey through the universe but he doesn’t leave the world he’s in so you should change the name
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23347688705020000″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23347688705020000″></a><small>4mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>8<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23347688705020000″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23347688705020000″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>9</a><a title=”pasito_tun_tun” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4316481083″ href=”/profile/4316481083?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”pasito_tun_tun”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>pasito_tun_tunLv4<svg></image></svg><a title=”pasito_tun_tun” href=”/profile/4316481083?appId=10″>pasito_tun_tun</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>The story is not bad in itself, the problem is that the author (or translator) changes the names of the characters. For example: Kohta is called Cat, Rei is Ray…. There are also very embarrassing parts of the story, it’s exactly Mc in the way he acts and talks with other characters, he looks like a beta SIMp with OP skills.
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